[quote=Malikoy]
@Delta44 your character looks interesting but there is no way I am accepting it into this realistic RP without at least explaining her relation or history to Cherryville. You never mentioned that. Also the character seems a bit too powerful for a zombie survival genre. Dawn seems more suited for action-combat RPs. Please edit it and tone the character down. As for the rest you are all good to go as soon as I post the first IC. @Alex your character is also interesting, but edit that last part that says Leon was sent to Cherryville to contain an infection. This RP takes place at the very first day of the zombie apocalypse, there are no military troops in the town yet, or awareness of an infection.
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Alright, edited in a few things. For simplicities sake I'll write what I did here: 

I added she was born in Cherryville, and is returning there to eliminate a certain "loose end". She now has an AR-15 Assault Rifle and her M.1911 as weapons, and I've excluded that last part in the skills section. If you want, I could probably list a few disadvantages to the character.