You can post your CS [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/63723/posts/ooc]here[/url] to be reviewed.
Less expansive CSs are fine, as long as the important information is there. We can't judge whether it is until we see it of course. LeeRoy is currently offline, but if you go ahead and post your cs in the thread i linked to i can give you an estimate of its viability right away. Don't worry, no one will judge you if it's insufficient.

Edit: Oh, i get now what you mean by dump. Can you post a link? I don't see it in your post history.
Edit2: Herp, it's in your signature. I'll have a quick look at it.