You know what, it's getting late and i'm too tired to do a full review. I skimmed it and have a few random points to make:
- Is there any reason he weighs so little? Sure, he's short, but i know 5' asian women who weigh more than 90 lbs. In fact, Nyaga is absurdly light as well. It seems to me a snake of that size would weigh 1000 pounds rather than 200. Then again, i tend to overestimate the weight of things, so you'll need a second opinion.
- Curses are still unspecified and vulnerable to Batmanning.
- There's no mention of how much Terror beast form enhances his physical abilities.

I'll do a full review tomorrow if someone else hasn't yet by that time, which is unlikely.