Not quite. This part still irks me quite the lot: "As Ido launched a palm strike...", followed by "Sol jumped over the attack...".

Sol isn't even half as fast as he should be to dodge a sound have (or handgun bullet, for that matter, since they are nearly equal in speed) after it is launched, so you gotta watch your owrding there. It is fine if he jumps a split second before the attack is launched, predicting where Ido will land and trying to intercept him in such a manner, but otherwise, it isn't a viable move.