@ Melon:
John Henry is acceptable as is, I'll add him to the list.

@Tharraleos:
The only real question I have about his Pride Empowerment:
Is this empowerment the source of his power, or does it increase his power? The former is fine, the latter is not acceptable.

That's a good way to have telepathy, I like it.

The elemental manipulation is orderly and not floaty at all, I like it.

Is the Cross Halberd shaped like this:
[img=http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120620052917/dynastywarriors/images/thumb/5/57/DW_Strikeforce_-_Cross_Halberd_9.png/100px-334,568,0,233-DW_Strikeforce_-_Cross_Halberd_9.png]

or this

[img=http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20131212173628/dynastywarriors/images/9/9c/Cross_Halberd_-_5th_Weapon_%28DW8XL%29.png]