@Whirlwind, got nothing to say about it. Consider her accepted.
@Enalais, all I got to say is you need some work on your grammar and such. You have a lot of run-ons there, I mean your personality is 1 sentence. Think about that.
@IncredibleBee, it's a rather short CS hm? Maybe a bit too short, considering the length that the others have. There is plenty to say about her history if you just wish to do so.
@ThornyRose, I am not too keen on guys with masks. They always seem to be the epitome of awesomeness, or so the writer thinks. That aside a mask isn't functional whatsoever in a battle. Also, he's a master of everything? Can write, is medically trained and is a perfect swordsman?
@Wintergrey, Astrid, or should I say Lagertha, is accepted. 
@Professor_Wyvern, I find the appearance of Durst to barely match the setting at all. When I think of a barbarian I think of some guy wearing furs and using rusty falchions and hatchets, or even a wooden club. The type of guy who hides in the bushes to whack you over your head so he can steal your goods. His history also doesn't really match the setting. I'm unsure if you're okay with making it different, because Durst probably won't be getting in.
@Nron, he's a cool guy but he seems to be a master at doing everything. Consider cutting back the skills he has. The idea of some warrior prancing about, jumping left and right cutting people down doesn't seem like something I'd envision in the setting. There's a reason lightly armored warriors were usually the first ones to die in a real battle, right? :lol
@Descartes, I can find this guy fitting the role of Stag pretty well. Consider him accepted too.