[quote=Professor_Wyvern]
Yeah, sometimes it does that, but uh yeah. Tell me anything you'd want edited, and such, er and what not.
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No, it is actually much much better. I kind of envision these people as riders, using a lot of horses. however that's up to you though, I just think riding across the desert is easier than walking. I like the character, if you have no further additions you wanna make I will accept him. 

[quote=IncredibleBee]
It's not that she's not going to take back the throne- it's her birthright, after all. She just has qualms about, y'know, killing her brother. That's not something people do on a whim.Rest assured, taking back her place as queen is still the end goal, and hiring mercenaries to supplant her troops (because she really needs a guard should Godwin decide to send a raid her way) is a means to that end.Moreover, I wanted to play someone relatively soft spoken, with a gentle, more feminine visage. I understand if that might seem to clash with what you envisioned for the leader of a ragtag army, but that was my intention. Despite appearing frail and effeminate, she's still going to work towards those goals.
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I can envision, but her brother had no problems with taking her throne. He didn't seem bothered at all, actually. I can see where she's coming from -- but she took her birthright. Either way it might work, I'll wait until tomorrow to brainstorm it a bit and come up with ideas before I give my verdict, maybe I'll have a moment of clarity and envision it better. After all I need to set my sight to your side, seeing how it might work for a more frail and feminine person to do this. I hope you can be patient with me. If you have any ideas or suggestions feel free to PM.