[quote=VarionusNW]
Wish I got here sooner. I wanted to join in yesterday, since I love Yu-Gi-Oh! and play it online a shit ton (DuelingNetwork) I saw that people were creating their own cards, which is great, but you need people with experience in PSCT (problem solving card text) and card balancing. So, I looked through Charak's cards.... There were a few that seemed a bit broken. Definently the one that allows his wolf things to attack directly. That is broken to hell. If he gets a big board with one of his XYZs out, it is GG, my friend. Also, for your other character, Charak, I saw "Cast out of heaven"... Charak, please take into account that you are not the only person who can use the cards that you create. In the right hands, this card could win games. Dead man's last call... With it's wording how it would work is like this: bring back a monster, Xyz/synchro/Ignis/tribute with it to get it off the field again, and you don't get the negatives. Basically, it can be used as monster reborn. Also, Ironstoke blacksmith and the cursed sword, durahann are just copies of Iron Blacksmith Kotetsu and Noble Arms- Gallatin, respectively. I have to say, your most broken card is from dusk to dawn. Free level 3 every turn? have you ever heard of Burning Abyss? they are kinda a top tier meta deck right now. If someone wanted to play them, this card would make losing near impossible.Also, your cards that mention fairies, are you talking about "Fairy" monsters (those with Fairy in the name) or Fairy-type monsters? if you are ever referring to a monster type, use [type name]-type. also, for attributes, use the attribute name in all caps (Example: FIRE)I will set up my own stuff soon.Edit: I just saw Final Judgement. I think you just meant Pendulum Monster not "Pendulum". Using "__" would be referring to the card's name, not its card type.
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*slowly breaths in*

Okay upon further notice that card that allows Fang monsters to attack directly could be deemed broken with the inclusion of the Xyz Fang monsters as such I will edit it to include "Any battle damaged dealt to the opponent is halved" but then remove the 500 decrease

Cast Out of heaven I can see where your going with so i think i could weaken the effect to something similar to Icarus attack but it only targets spell and trap's

And about Ironstoke blacksmith and cursed sword Durahann Iron stoke was meant to be similar to Kotetsu just with slightly better ATk and defense And I like using the noble Knight's monsters and Gallatin is my usual go to card for a quick buff so yea but the difference between Gallatin is the lack of the ability to switch control by coming back from the grave. 

and Dawn to dusk ah the bane of my existance Time to add the Text "If you control No monsters" to it.
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in other news Nice dark syncros and I will make extensive changes to my deck's

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