Sorry, but those changes really aren't much better. Honestly, I'd recommend removing the whole "got knocked out and was pregnant when she woke up" bit and going with one of the suggestions people have made. Have her get seduced (not just knocked out repeatedly until she decides she likes it), get pregnant (without the aid of getting knocked out) and then have the father abandon her afterwards.
 
Also I feel I should point out that "those that requested them" is literally everyone else in the thread except for one person who hasn't said anything on the subject. It's not like it's just a vocal minority complaining about it.

And honestly, "he doesn't enjoy beating people up and breaking things, he enjoys hanging out with his gang, it's just that they enjoy beating people up and breaking things" doesn't make me think any better of that part of the profile. And honestly, the whole "leader of the notorious biker gang" bit is probably going to make most interaction not work.