[quote=Whirlwind] Wren was standing... ah well. [/quote] I'm gonna advance the story so it doesn't matter that much anymore. [quote=Bladewind] Kimono, and everyone else for that matter, feel free to critique my posts. I love hearing about flaws in my writing. [/quote] There's a difference between constructive criticism and blatantly saying something is flawed. The former is nice. The latter isn't. [quote=Derpstone] Just for clarities sake:No one has engaged Theo in conversation during him training off-duty guardsmen yet, right?Cause in that case I could possibly start breaking away from this training to give Gnarl a report. [/quote] No, nobody has done that. Feel free to visit Gnarl in his quarters.