[quote=TheSovereignGrave]
Nice posy Luna, but I want to point out two things. Firstly, the men wouldn't have outright said they're bringing an offer of alliance; the most they would've said is that they have a message from the Grand Prince. And two, they've been riding for days ...
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Done! Edited! What do you think now?

Also, what did you think of my ingloriously long infodumps about her family and associations? I was worried it would bore anyone that read it.

[quote=Goldeagle1221]
Dirty riding clothes.. mmmm...AND THEN SUDDENLY THE BULL COMES CRASHING THROUGH THE WALL, GUNS BLAZING.
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NO GUNS. NO GUNPOWER = NO GUNS... I DON'T MIND MEETING THE BULL WITH THIS character, but i imagine it'll be quite the ruckus!