[quote=Lunamaria]
Hey SovereignGrave, do you mind if I change my "Lucille gets angry at the dirty messengers" segment? Or have you already started writing a response in which your tired, dirty men respond to my character (lucille) going grazy over them getting the carpet dirty?The reason I'd like to edit this segment out is because I realized my character Lucille is not the type of person to get angry at people making her floor dirty. The way I wrote it, as of right now, it is completely out of character. So I want to edit that segment out.
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That's cool, I've only been thinking about it. I haven't actually started writing anything yet.