I personally think that the sheet in general could be worded waaaaaaaaaaay differently (Or better). That's where we got most of our problems. I can help if you like. But, I'm personally tired of super muscular, super tall, people. Sooooo, tone that down a bit. He doesn't have to short, but tone that down a bit. I would also like it if you formatted the sheet (Bold the fields, indent here and there, etc, etc) like the others. It makes it easier to read. Also, you forgot to put something in your sheet, review the rules to find out what! 

And instead of sound manipulation, what about vibration manipulation?

Tiddy up your sheet a bit, then we'll talk.