[quote=Cairomaru]
Our characters are going to be screwed either way with the way things are going lol.By the way i finally cracked down and bought five nights at freddy's. Here's two examples of how it went/felt playing this fucking game. First, a youtube animationNow a pictureI really need someone to talk to me or something on skype when i play this game again, because i can NOT sit through this nightmare version of chuck e cheese again by myself
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I feel like eating at Chuck E Cheese will cause you to experience extreme PTSD-like Flashbacks. 

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Also, in regards to the route, looks fine to me. Although I'm used to just throwing myself at something and hitting it until it stops moving, so I may not be the best advice here. I'd also like to imagine, since we're passing right through the (former) Falkreath Imperial Camp, it's a bit larger than four tents and a handful of (dead) soldiers.