[hider=Eklipse] [b]Alondite:[/b] This would seem to be in need of either an activation cost or a maintenance cost, more likely the former than the latter. There are also a few OGG mistakes in this. [indent]Sample Correction: Discard 1 card; equip this card to a "Swordsman" monster. The equipped monster may attack all monsters your opponent controls, once each.[/indent] [b]Devouring Sword:[/b] There are a number of OGG mistakes here as well as a need to limit of some sort. This is more powerful than "Axe of Despair" in the way that rather than returning to the top of your Deck when it is destroyed, thus limiting your next turn's draw, it activates directly from the Graveyard, making this a very powerful recycle ability. [indent]Sample Correction: Equip only to a Warrior-Type monster. The equipped monster gains 700 ATK; also, it must attack, if able. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard and you control a "Swordsman" monster, you can: Equip this card to 1 "Swordsman" monster you control. You may only control 1 "Devouring Sword".[/indent] [b]Masamura:[/b] Surprisingly, I have no complaints here for limits. Only OGG. [indent]Sample Correction: Equip only to a "Swordsman" monster. Once per turn, if the equipped monster would be destroyed by your opponent's card effect, you can: Banish 1 "Swordsman" monster from your Graveyard, and if you do, negate the activation and destroy it.[/indent] [b]Sharpened Blades:[/b] I'm just going to offer an alternative to this. [indent]Sample Correction: Monsters you control gain 500 ATK for each Equip Spell equipped to them.[/indent] [b]Swordsman's Resolve:[/b] Get rid of the quotation marks around the effect. Maybe specify Level 5 or higher Warrior-Type monster to make it more relevant to the deck. If not, this becomes a really good splashable card. Which, don't get me wrong, that's fine if you want it that way, but if you want it more relevant, you can add Warrior-Type. [b]Tyrfing:[/b] Make it specific to Warrior-Types or "Swordsman" monsters. Otherwise, good. [b]Silent Cape:[/b] MUAHAHAHAHA! Screw MSTing my "Call of the Haunted" now! I've got this Equip Spell that keeps it from destroying my monster! MUAHAHAHA! *Ahem* Sorry. I shall just . . . post this minor correction here and move on my way. [indent]Sample Correction: Equip only to a Warrior-Type monster. It is unaffected by Trap Cards.[/indent] [/hider] I'll post my review of your other cards later. The most noticeable problems I could find was in your Equip Spells, so I went for them first.