In hopes that I will be accepted, I humbly offer my character for scrutiny. 

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[b]Name[/b]: Tyr Qynn 

[b]Sex/Gender[/b]: M/M

[b]Age[/b]: 19

[b]Species[/b]: Kel Dor

[b]Dominant Hand[/b]: Right

[b]Appearance[/b]: 
•	He has the typical Kel Dor appearance with crimson red skin and black eyes. An antiox breath mask covers the majority of his face, including his eyes, mouth and tusks, giving him an intimidating appearance. He stands at 5’10” (1.78 meters) and weighs about 150lbs (68 kg). He has a stocky build and a good deal of physical strength. He typically wears a white set of robes, he also wears a four fingered glove over his right hand, the tips of each finger adorned with a talon.

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[b]Personality[/b]:
•	While not particularly shy, he tends not to spearhead conversation. He is happy with simply keeping with the rest of the flock. He has no mind or care for political matters and pays them little to no attention. He does however have an intellectual side to him, he simply enjoys reading and absorbing information even on ‘useless’ things. He also enjoys learning of more supernatural and fantastical things, such as myths like those found on his home planet of Dorin. He is kind and, as many Jedi are, enjoys helping other people even though sometimes he lacks the courage to break away from the ‘flock’ mentality. Although appearing to seem like somewhat of a loner, he enjoys being around people. Without anything to stimulate his brain, he feels rather uncomfortable being by himself.

[b]Abilities[/b]: 
•	He can speak Galactic Basic and Kel Dor
•	With the help of his antiox breath mask and goggles, he can project his voice and be able to withstand the vacuum of space for a short time.
•	As a benefit of his species, he naturally has heightened reflexes and a form of telepathy.
•	Form II: Makashi – He is proficient in this form, focusing solely on single-handed movements. While he relies on quick, efficient strikes, his natural strength allows him to withstand hard strikes easier.
•	Form III: Soresu – To help remove the weaknesses of Form II but also benefit from Form II tight movements, he has also, to a lesser extent, practiced Form III to defend against blasters.

[b]Force Powers[/b]:
•	Telepathy as it is a natural gift found in the Kel Dor race
•	Telekinesis
•	Minor Tutaminis – Although not able to deflect blaster bolts or lightsabers, he, for now, is working to use it to lessen the effects of Force powers used against him, should the need arise.

Typically, he does not use his Force abilities in battle but if he does, they are only to compliment his dueling skills, never to outshine them. 

Weapon(s):
•	A single curved blade lightsaber with a gold blade

[b]Bio[/b]:
•	Tyr was born on the Kel Dor world of Dorin; he was an only child. As a child, he was interested in learning. He loved to read and learn of his planet’s rich culture. Even on his home planet of Dorin, the Force was already a part of his life. The Kel Dors were known to have their own group of Force Sages, who specialized as Seers. As soon as it was realized that Tyr had his own connection with the Force, he was educated and tutored by the few Baran Do Sages left on Dorin. Despite the rare opportunity to possibly gain a new member to the clan and against the Sages’ objections, he was shipped off world at the age of 10 to an academy where he could get a more holistic training in the Force, including combat, since there were so few Jedi left in the universe.

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