So to recap Western District: 1. Roan is looking for Lavica but he is being followed by five people and is at a dead end. He is opposite the tavern on an alley. 2. Lavica is right outside the Gutted Karak after bumping into Kaiden 3. Amy is outside the Gutted Karak 4. Kaiden attempts to seduce Lavica when his companions interrupt him. 5. Shin falls though the ground and meets an evoker, The Baron Markul. They introduce each other. NE: 1. Stevan Vlahovic attends the King's Court and discovers the King has crowned the Prince as heir effective immediately. He wishes an audience with the king. He is also chasing an evoker under the protection of the Kal. embassy but cannot get to her yet. Somewhere 1. Thora is wandering the city looking for shelter 2. A noviate of Idris is chasing a female evoker that left the inn (I assume this is Lavica?) 3. Myth is still headed towards the capital. 4. Alessia and Angie are at the Kalesian embassy. Angie was chased by Stevan. Did I miss anything? I'm fairly certain this is everything that happened recently. ============== Most web pages aren't ideal for reading. I am sorry for saying that it was just a long block of words but it's just hard on the eyes and I can't help it if I am suddenly reading a sentence two lines down from where I started. It's not that I'm skimming but readability suffers because on the long trip back to the left margin I may lose track of the next line and when I'm reading especially long posts which affects my mood and understanding so it really helps when things are spaced out. I'm not sure how to explain in detail but AlidaMaria has posts of comparable length to yours yet I find it much easier to digest. Something about AlidaMaria's spacing just flows as a narrative whereas yours feels bulky. It's subtle but significant. I'm not attacking your ability as a writer nor your creativity because you can write; I know that my writing is weaker in comparison to everyone else's simply by reading their ICs. It's just spacing can really affect the readability of a post and I really should have worded my thoughts better at the time so it didn't sound so crass. Ultimately we are all here to have fun, share stories, and improve as writers along the way so let's keep it that way and leave this episode behind us.