Thora took a room at the gutted karak. Whether she is there atmosphere isn't too important, she can be moved if necessary.

Maki, we're not trying to claim that your post is bad. In fact, the contents are actually quite good. However, sticking about 400 words in a single paragraph makes for tough reading. When we write, we keep it to about three-four sentences per paragraph. That is generally fairly easy for others, and ourselves, to read.