How can Sol see the Kzichballs coming if he should be behind the tree charging his magic at that time? If he peeks from behind it, then write that in please, since otherwise, it sounds as if he saw them coming through the tree's trunk. It really is confusing. 

Plus, he cannot wait until the last moment without being able to see all the spheres - which he won't, since 30 of the Kzichballs would actualy have the tree's trunk between them and Sol for most of the time. Guessing the point in time at which they would reach him would [i]probably[/i] (you're welcome to think of more options) be the only other way to dodge by jumping, but he can't really do that without knowing their exact trajectory.

Also, i'd like to pay you attention to what i actualy write. The mist is filling up the spheres from insidee, so there's no way a gust could even touch it. I think i wrote that clear enough. *grumpsulkgrump*