[quote=Mr Allen J]
I know I haven't posted here in ages, that's because I kinda let my writing take up too much of my free time, so I'm planning on drawing one thing a day. No matter how awful.And making all of you look at it.Feast your eyes!
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It's hard to critique this without the reference you used to draw this, since it's a still-life by the looks of it.