You're off to a good start with your CS Charlie, but it needs a little more content before it is acceptable. 

Add two or three more good sentences to his personality and another 4-5 sentence paragraph for his backstory, and I'll take another look. Just think of what makes him tick, what his motives are, his habits, etc. Go more in depth about how his home life, the death of his father, and the riot's affected him and molded him into the character that he is now. Take your time, I didn't mean for you to feel rushed if that was the case. Be aware of grammar as well.

Also, the picture link is not working correctly.