[quote=Ellri]
It'd have been preferred if you posted it here first, but thats too late now. We'll give you a semi-quick review.
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I was actually going to redesign my character anyways! I knew I rushed it, and I didn't like the way it turned out. I want to keep the immortality because his character design doesn't suit him without it, but I'll remove any references to Grim Reaper. Rather I'll put him as someone who's been in the shadows, helping out on quests from time to time but mainly just wandering the lands in search of information. I'll figure out a way to make the immortality plausible, but I'll probably change him from being really old to less then a century old. It'll be better if he starts young.

Thanks for the help :)