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@Astarael: Hmm, my problem here is that he just seems... kind of chaotic with no real personality? Um, hmm.@Grey Star: Accepted.@Princess: Accepted. The class names are to describe their role, but keep in mind not to make them too "game-y".@Masaki Haruna: I'll wait until this one's been edited. You can make her from the Japan-analogue, but you'll have to explain why she's around and pick a different picture even still.@The Rider: Okay. On one hand, I don't mind party members being scoundrels, and everyone doesn't have to get along. But the party members have no not want to kill one another, and someone who tortures for fun, calls demons(though I currently need to figure them out better for this setting), and carries a knife they carved from the bone of a sapient being, um... Basically he's pretty blatantly evil and I'm not sure why the non-evil members of the party would tolerate his presence.I'm not saying everyone's character has to be a great person, but they have to be people who can't justifiably be killed by other members of the party.
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Hmm...fair enough....your criticism makes sense. I'll rework him completely tonight.