[quote=NarcissisticPotato]
What Santa said, sums the most of it up! Right now, Quiet, I'm debating if I'm ok with his powers. I suppose a certain level of unpredictability would counter him? With that in mind, I shall give you my seal of approval but let's see what the others say!
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Not so much unpredictability as things he physically can't handle, which I suppose unpredictability plays into. Like, he could watch a bullet being fired at him, but couldn't do anything but watch. If he saw someone pulling a gun on him though, he could probably move out of the way of the barrel in time if they aren't a rather quick shot. He can make mistakes too, and feints will have some effectiveness against him. Oh, and he has to activate his ability himself, so that can dull his reaction time quite significantly. Not to mention he can't exactly do anything about stuff outside of line of sight.

I get quite particular with my powers. If you think anything's too vague, then I'll try to elaborate.

[quote=Teal]
 and if you have any questions about the plot, let me know. I have a full summary of what's happened until now in my PM storage.
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That would be appreciated!