> Oh lol, that might actually be the fault of my writing style… I'm shit at writing fight scenes, so I just kinda glazed over her solo fight with "eventually the thing died." As for the two uninjured heartless, same thing applies, plus I assumed Gail sped things up. I can change it if you like, I just wanted it to end with Ellis attempting to confront Gail.

That's fine for perhaps a future post but for now I just want to focus on getting every character responding to the situation. Once that happens, we can move on to a confrontation. And I am not the greatest and fight scenes either.