[quote=Kyrisse]
[b]Name:[/b] Cassandra Sinclair ("Cassie")
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Ещё раз здравствуйте! (Hello again!) I'm back and commenting some more, hope you don't mind.

[quote]In the year 2063[/quote]
Actually this is more like 2540, or thereabouts, just figured I'd let you know.

[quote]There was widespread panic and massive destruction all over the world.[/quote]
Again based on my own knowledge, Endolas attacked near Munich and wreaked havoc certainly, but there was no worldwide devastation. 

[quote]To Cassie, it was a normal day. [/quote]
This is more of a minor personal nitpick, but you might want to put something to show this is going from, "Her parents did this" to the day her life went to Argentina.

[quote]The tests showed a very high compatibility.[/quote]
[quote]Part of her rejoiced at testing positive[/quote]
As Kapu has already said himself, all humans are compatible with a mythic of some sort, so there wouldn't really be a "high compatibility" or "testing positive", I admit I made this mistake myself. Just figured I'd say it again. Because nitpicks. Heheh, sorry about that.

[quote]* She is visited by her parents a lot (well, if they are allowed to visit)[/quote]
To my knowledge, absolutely! 
You also get the equivalent of two thousand USD a month as a third year :)

And that's all that really stood out to me, I think it looks pretty good otherwise, but of course Kapuchu himself has the final say in things.

Also:
[quote] The woman fell to the ground, writhing, her body reduced to a twisted mass of burnt flesh as it hit the pavement.[/quote]
You'll fit in well here I think, especially with Eldritch and myself.
Another small note, seeing as you gave her information in imperial you might want to keep a calculator with metric conversion ready, we basically just use metric here.