Marines often times (I took my thing from idea from real life which is why it came up) put a personal detail, normally they are small, but as a personal thing he printed it himself, if you want it gone I've got no qualms, I'm a detail person.

I can fix the sentences that'll be easy it's just I tend to try and write it and it normally ends out bad I'll get it later when I'm not on mobile.

And the girlfriend my thing is like he just got there, he doesn't know so for now MIA, I'll find out later depending on how everything lines up. I'm a very fluid person when it comes to things in a story, I never set a plan for characters like that because sometimes it wouldn't make sense so I'll find out as we get there.