[quote=JohnWolff] [quote=SgtEasy]Also, I am sorry for the low quality post. I'm feeling tired. [/quote] Heh. I'm sorry I kept on reediting my last post. It just bugged me how preachy the original version of my post was, how I wrote a lengthy backstory that dived into Sayaka's past again when she was supposed to have a conversation with Gorrendil. It felt like I was writing a Sayaka fan fic, and it didn't feel natural at all fitting it into the conversation like that, so I had to change it. But when I did, the whole sentence structure didn't feel right - and it still doesn't, frankly speaking. [/quote] Nah it's fine