[quote=@Dualbellatorum] @Durandal - EVerything looks fantastic, but could you please de-God Mod this line for me? " is able to amass vast amounts of resources compared to various other states" ... it's kind of saying, "my nation can produce LOADS AND LOADS OF STUFF, WAY MORE THAN YOU GUYS," which I don't inherently have a problem with, but someone no doubt will. Just erm, I don't know, dull it down a little. Something like "is one of the main producers of raw materials", that way it leaves breathing room. [/quote] Not to mention such over enthusiastic production would lead to criminal deflation and thus crash the economy when everyone starts loosing money when the value of their whatever drops well below what they need to live. Sure, you could say, "WE PRODUCE WAY MORE THAN ANYONE" but at the same time you're also saying, "Our economy is basically fucked because flooded market". [quote=@Dualbellatorum] [quote=@Dinh AaronMk] I feel ahead of my time for using the character section of the RP thread. [/quote] Nope. You just didn't read the last line of the OOC text. :) EDIT: But it looks good to me, accepted! I'm guessing you time travelled ahead of my decision, to save yourself the hassle. [/quote] Yea well the section is there for a reason now, and I would have moved it there anyways. Might as well keep OOC "cleaned up" and use a potentially under-used section of the thread.