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Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by Lugubrious
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I have a present for you, Scarifar. And one for Sixsmith
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Man you people chat a lot. I'll have to catch up later though, because I just got invited to a LAN party with cheap beer. Hence tonight and tomorrow morning no update as I plan to get bombed out of my skull with about 30 other blokes while shooting nazis.
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Scarifar Presto~!

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Hmm, the pictures look great, really, but.... not what I was expecting. I expected Daniel to have more of a lithe build, maybe something more like what you'd expect of a high school street brawler. Thin, but still showing enough muscle to know that he's a strong guy. His chest seems a little too well-defined for me. Also, the straight sword, which is meant to be a short sword, seems to be as long as the curved longsword, which shouldn't be right, and I was expecting the swords to be on his hips, although perhaps I should have made that part a little clearer. The emblem I was expecting to have the swords the same shape as the two swords I just mentioned, though it still looks pretty good (I expected the sterotypical straight swords, at least though, and not sabers). Of course, you don't have to go through any trouble for any of my opinions. Just wanted to let you know.
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Hmm, the pictures look great, really, but.... not what I was expecting. I expected Daniel to have more of a lithe build, maybe something more like what you'd expect of a high school street brawler. Thin, but still showing enough muscle to know that he's a strong guy. His chest seems a little too well-defined for me. Also, the straight sword, which is meant to be a short sword, seems to be as long as the curved longsword, which shouldn't be right, and I was expecting the swords to be on his hips, although perhaps I should have made that part a little clearer. The emblem I was expecting to have the swords the same shape as the two swords I just mentioned, though it still looks pretty good (I expected the sterotypical straight swords, at least though, and not sabers). Of course, you don't have to go through any trouble for any of my opinions. Just wanted to let you know.
As always, you get one free redo. I'll see if I can't work your feedback in. How's this?
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Better, much better. Thanks, Lug.
Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by Sho Minazuki
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I'm actually going to have to say that... Jack speaks at an ACCELERATED pace. Not an unintelligible pace. It's not all the time either. You'll still understand him if your character is any good at understanding the language he's speaking. I let it slide the first time. There's also that my team (I'm not sure on other teams) seem to ignore that... Well. We just got out of combat together. You know, Salamander's Nest, check the first post. And this is only a personal note, I understand Kaben, that your character acts guarded and has eccentricities as her shield, but maybe tone down on wanting to kill your own team mates? Based on psychology, if she's having those kinds of thoughts frequently and is close to acting on them, your character is not guarded anymore. Just mentally unstable. It's especially unfitting considering the fate of your family. Now I'm not saying stop, I'm saying tone down, just be careful not to overstep into psychotic territory. I swear if I'm the one who has to keep ya'll in line I will.
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The person she referred to as 'her future meal' was actually Geni, not Jack. I thought that had been implied well enough with her saying she was going to kill him and all. But, I guess not.
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Yep, I had a hard time figuring it out, and I couldn't. Probably next time try referring to Geni as the "lion dude" or something. That'd be a lot easier.
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Or Lab Member 004; Genitina!
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O.o
Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by Sho Minazuki
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I can take this in unsavory and dirty directions but I choose not to. Also in regards to Savo he has lapses in activity. He's in the Persona RP I play in as well, and he disappears quite a bit. Though he does occasionally return.
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Is mah other teacher accepted, Lugu? ;o Oh and awesome emblem! I shall attach it to Jayden's CS as soon as I can. And running into Solomon is an awesome idea. If the rest of the team is okay with that? ;o
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Is mah other teacher accepted, Lugu? ;o Oh and awesome emblem! I shall attach it to Jayden's CS as soon as I can. And running into Solomon is an awesome idea. If the rest of the team is okay with that? ;o
Yeah, I'm sure we have the time for it! Maybe he can help us find Victor's arm? Then again... some of us might know precisely where it is :P
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Hey Lucius, I just noticed something.... Did you change your images of food porn?
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So who will be our 4th member if Savo is wiped?
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EL. PSY. CONGROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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LOOKS LIKE TEARSTONE IS HERE!!!
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LOOKS LIKE TEARSTONE IS HERE!!!
Oh goodie, and the second Foxy Lady joins the game.
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LOOKS LIKE TEARSTONE IS HERE!!!
Oh goodie, and the second Foxy Lady joins the game.
And just like that, Foxey Lady by Jimi Hendrix is stuck in my head.
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LOOKS LIKE TEARSTONE IS HERE!!!
Oh goodie, and the second Foxy Lady joins the game.
And just like that, Foxey Lady by Jimi Hendrix is stuck in my head.
Let me help you with that https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_PVjcIO4MT4
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