@RabidAnubis Salezenathor is looking good, I would ask more into his history aside from just the rivalry with your brother. A big thing I would like to see is an explanation on how you came across a legendary bow. Aside from that I don't have any complaints. @AiyvaGuard looks like your still WIP but I don't see any big problems at the moment. @Hydra The Character looks good our little priest boy will be nice, but you are missing one thing that is supposed to go in the Other category before I can accept him. (glance over the rules section again real quick) Edit: ohh wait just saw the whole 4ft blade thing ya that might be a little bit of a hiccup