@RabidAnubis with the changes ill say its good. ill let you keep your secrets for now. so you can go ahead and move him to the accepted page.

@AiyvaGuard That is a lot of text walls but I see some problems. It looks like you are trying to be a whole lot of things at once. Beast Tamer, Warrior, Mage and what not I would prefer if you tried to focus on one and go with that. Especially due to the characters age It would be hard to master one of those things especially with her secluded life for a majority of the time. I really don't know what to say about it, but you have a whole lot of abilities without a way to explain how it happened. I would say pick one and add a little bit to your bio, then say with nowhere to go on your own you ended up joining the Order bla bla bla new home stuff.

@Hydra with the bit added you are good to go.

Now with random things to fix the currency is just Silver coin, easy simple and all that

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