[quote=@Pirouette] Sorry I'm late Goy, but Myra and Vyra (no connections made yet, waiting to see the response) are ready to be reviewed. [/quote] Yeah, and you disregarded rule number one too, but then again, it's rather hard to see since it's at the bottom of its post. So I don't fault you for it. I like the dynamic between Myra and Vyra, and enjoyed reading their creation stories. I take issue, however, with the line stating that they have become more powerful since the death of the Golden One. Power provided by mortal worship is petty compared to the grossly incandescent essence given freely to Its children before the War in Heaven. But that's the only issue I have. Remove that, and you're golden and accepted. Give me some time to wind down from a rather eventful day, and the IC should be up in a few hours or so.