Yeah :) :(  Was not my intention, the first draft was half that size if if i recall.  

I tend to have issues with dialogue.  This post needed the dialogue, trying to explain my new character because I may not end up posting a CS nor race sheet for him until much later in the RP.  So when interacting with him speculation on who he is and what he has done is kinda what im going for.  In a book when a race appears after having never been seen in a couple hundred years, do the characters know who and what they are and do automatically?  ;)