Sure thing though only thing I would change probably would be Scorn's real name. Scorn's real name is hardly known by anyone. Only the officials of Curdon Cay knew before they were all released and Keira only knows threw her snooping and digging around to uncover information on her half sister. Other then that sure, besides it would be foolish to try and take Scorn on out in the open, just because she's on her own doesn't necessarily mean she is alone.