hm.. not to sure if that ability will work I will say, because it's bit op, it's pretty much an Acidic/Poison attack, that all he has to do is bite them to do... and in a combat situation chances for that is fairly good if your up close to them.

Do remember you will be fighting another player, in this case my character and his minions, so got to balance abilities somewhat, especially starting of the rp abilities for the Heroes, sense the goal is they grow stronger as they train and fight the evil.