well my character is technically undead and his kind of evil.

Pippsd, think about how a human is different compared to other races, and that's how his racial abilities will be... one thing about humans is they can adapt to things better than other races because of how they are. not to sure about that power, kind of in the same boat as how Namelos-mann's wither bite, except it's even more powerful sense he can control it like his controlling water... hm.. main thing need to know is if he can call it out of nothing or he actually needs acid around to use his power?

TheSecret, what kind of downsides is there to that heavenly body magic? I can see it's fairly powerful when you know how to use it, which they are suppost to new people who is seeking fame and fortune.

McHaggis yours is probably the easiest one to grade when looking at him I see nothing extremely powerful of him at the moment, which is good sense their suppose to get stronger in the roleplay as time goes on, his backstory fits good, hm.. guess his the first accepted.