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Name:jack
Nickname:bubba
Age:15
Gender:male
Species:the last angelic warrior
Appearance(s):http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://dark.pozadia.org/images/wallpapers/90944006/Warriors/Warrior%252520Angel.jpg&imgrefurl=http://dark.pozadia.org/wallpaper/Warrior-Angel/&h=901&w=1279&tbnid=z2ZwnIcWL5EWfM:&zoom=1&q=angelic+warrior+male+anime&docid=0UUSYApnmHdQNM&ei=auDYVOmnCo-iyATjnoHAAQ&tbm=isch&ved=0CFEQMyglMCU
Crush:none so far
Relationship:unknown
Personality: lonely,fierce,kind-hearted,and fun at times
Bio(optional):abandoned when during the war of heaven and hell and forced to fight no one knows jack's history and never tells anyone of his past and trust no one but himself but with time jack will tell his past.
Likes/dislikes:dislikes the region of hell and people doing bad and like all things that are of good hearted people and some deamons
Schedule:chemistry, metal shop,wood shop, English 1, PE partners class, and engineer class
Last rule(so I know you read them):have fun
Other:u should add chemistry metal shop wood shop PE partners class and engineer class
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You need to send another picture. And space out everything. It's too much all together and unread able. I helped you a bit.

Also you need more detail in some things.