I like Toby, John. Just two small tweaks: firstly, if the Wilderness Wars refer to the cyclopes, that was nine-hundred years ago, though if that referred to a fight with a centaur tribe or a minotaur clan, there's no problem. Just specify. Also, while healing potions can cure disease, slow bleeding, and remove infection, they cannot actually heal any wounds. Also, just some sentiments from my fellow mods; Toby seems a tad old for his personality. Even though orcs live long and mature more slowly than humans, a seventy-year-old orc would probably be a tad more wise than Toby is. I'd suggest moving him down to say...fifty-ish, though I personally won't deny your sheet for something like that. Fix those two small things and you're in. I like the concept of a fisherman with dreams of being an explorer -very creative.