For the weapon I added length and weight for references. 
I redid so to say some bits there. The charging now referring to him changing the weight of the hammer up for one strong hit. But taking its time it appears as if he is charging.
It wasnt my idea to make him hard to wound so I rethink the ability to raising his pain tolerance instead. 

I could add a timer for the raised pain tolerance bit too?

not too sure if I explained spiteful well enough. 

About the back ground it was my first time writing, with out a check up afterwards. So mistakes are awaited, so that sample would be sort of the worst of me. I did noticed when rereading there were mistakes and found it silly how I mixed embraced with embarrassed up.
 Hope there are less mistakes now that I tried to fix them and it is easier to read? I noticed I ate up a few words and sentences I wanted to put in too. ^^;

For posts I would reread them at least twice with each a day in between, to fix the things I notice are wrong.