[@TalijaKey]

It definitely reads better but there's still a few minor spelling errors here and there. Also did you mean grief where you have griffin at? Or does he actually have one? Hah. ^^

I think a timer for the heightened pain tolerance be good, even with a high tolerance your body would still take damage and not being able to sense it could be a bad thing in the long run.

Also this is just for my own clarification,  about your hammer, is it a baby hammer? My math could be off but isn't. 5 m only around a foot and half long? Which would make sense if he swings it on a chain to make a shield? Unless I'm misunderstanding that part as well. 

[i]~ Alice [/i]