@TalijaKey, is your Warhammer a 1 or 2 handed weapon? Also, instead of a 'charge time' what would probably make more sense is a 'change time' as morphing your weapon into something heavier would likely take time(as opposed to just a imagined charge period) - I personally believe that it is a bit early for your character to have a passive ability alongside his active abilities- and a timer can difficult to work in an rp, which naturally has an abstract view of time. Resisting pain and pain tolerance is also more of a mental/learned thing than a programmable ability - I would also recommend expanding on the rest of his personality traits as well. My mentality is the more detail, the better. - I haven't finished rereading his background yet but I'm noticing a few spelling and grammatical errors here in there. This concludes CO-GM Myke's feedback . I think Milos is a good character, just needs a bit of spit and polish. -awk. Hadn't noticed that Alice had posted. Welp, like I said, these are my personal thoughts.