As a note, I'll be returning to my other post to keep reviewing the submission since they're on the first page anyway, so they're easier to get to/look at as I write. 

As a quick note though, [@TalijaKey] you probably shouldn't have presented us with your weaker writing sample since it is a first impression and if you knew it has flaws, they should have been checked before submitting since it saves us all a bit of time. ^^;

I have to write about 2-3 essays this weekend which includes a total rewrite of one and prepare for a group presentation. Even so, I should find bits of time still come on when needed, as I do lurk offline on my phone to check threads. I'll tag mentions in the other thread to keep things better collected. 

Thanks for your understanding guys.