[quote=@Genkai]

[@TheMusketMan] Whitehead is a really weird last name...not sure I'll be able to think about your guy without thinking about some kind of weird Indian or guy with weird acne (whitehead to blackhead idk). 

Erm moving on...

Personality is hard to read mostly because out that blurb I get:

+Charismatic and outgoing and then -blunt. The background about the personality just muddles it for me, you should probably just stick to the curt style everyone else is doing because some of the details like him smoking or liking Western culture don't really have anything to do with actual personality traits. To me, those are more quirks or mannerisms. I need to know his bare bones personality, not necessarily that he's a biker. You could then approach it by answering: What does being a biker say about him personally? He is free spirited, like freedom ('murica!?), etc?

You do give us more in the history like him being friendly and positive but really those are synonyms and end up being redundant, rather than informative. Maybe cite HOW he was friendly briefly? 

I'm tempted to say military would be obsolete due to "world peace" being established and everyone pretty much staying in "line" with everything, but it isn't a huge deal, just be aware any military would be significantly downsized and used for more basic things like say helping communities make repairs after natural disasters or something like that. 

Has he ever been to America, if his dad is from there, and he's totally into it, I'd assume he'd have gone at least once right? 

You may want to specify his residence as well since it should be Tokyo or nearby the city. 

And the online appearance, I'll need to say would not start off with a flaming head. I assume after an upgrade after say, him finishing his third and final year of "training" he would have gotten the accessory of fake flames. And I also want to know more about his weapon. I'm under the assumption (correct me if I'm wrong here) that he can reload pretty quickly, materialize new bullets. Do they do anything or are the old fashioned simple bullets? And the bicycle thing is okay...I guess, just try not to use it too much since some of the group might not have that kind of transport and I assume that maybe his most recent upgrade...since with the flaming head and TWO guns and bike, it is getting excessive. Does he have zero defense and close combat skills? Just trying to weigh your guy's pros/cons and see if I have everything straight.

And you keep calling him "collector" which isn't right, it's "Corrector" as in correcting the issues in the DgtWld, they're not collecting anything except maybe boatloads of cash.


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Ok. Whitehead is the surname of a friend of mine. It's English in origin. It's because people of that lineage tend to get white hair faster than others, hence "Whitehead". Also I dunno why I kept calling it collector, guess I was just derping out. And you're right about the guns, old fashioned bullets, but it fires fast and bullets materialize. And it makes sense that he'd visit America, so I'll add that. Also I know the personality is a bit...bad? I'll use the format the others used and revise it. On the Ghost Rider thing, I meant to portray him as recently finishing training and had gotten the upgrade but if its too over the top I can downsize it like...his transformations in the DgtWld are powered by emotion or..something along those lines. I'll work it out.