[@TheMusketMan] 

Can we get you to elaborate on the actual necessity of having the motorcycle? We're still confused as to how it would help in the DgtWld, it seems like an upgrade with really little merit besides character value and a tad bit heavy-handed. We understand that it's a main part of his character, his obsession with them and western culture but it seems like a bit of a loose end? 

Maybe he could have a replica of the bike in the real world instead? 

Also regarding your Guns. Can we get you to expand on their range and targeting abilities? Do you shoot both of them at once? If so wouldn't that lower accuracy? Also with the reload are the bullets really unlimired, anyway to tone that down to a reasonable amount? The weapons system needs a set of checks and balances, makes for a better story and to keep characters from being overpowered. 

That's all. Gah..hope that didn't sound to mean...

[@Anonymous]

Hiya ^^

So we like the idea of another male character, but gah this is gonna sound rather mean isn't it >…< could we get you to change his concept?

We already have a sycthe user and are trying to balance out the attack ranges in our group. If that makes sense?

Also about his personality, maybe something a little less edgy?

In general the Correctors aren't exactly wild cards, they're meant to be generally good people who can deal with living double lives.

 We have a few colorful characters and are looking to balance them out, that's not necessarily saying people have to play straight laced upstanding citizens but there are more ways to give a character life besides being edgy or completely out in left field.

Hah I hope I didn't sound preachy,  it's late here but I wanted to give out some feed back before the nights over with. 

Please ask any questions that you need. Any clarification at all.

[i]~ Alice [/i]