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[hider=Altzer Lantze][b]Name:[/b] Altzer Lantze

[b]Age: [/b] 14

[b]Sex: [/b] Male

[b]Sexuality:[/b] Heterosexual

[b]Appearance:[/b]
[img]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/233/f/2/Oz_Bezarius_by_ViChaN91312.png[/img]

[b]Height:[/b] 4’ 6”

[b]Weight:[/b] 89 lb

[b]Personality:[/b] Altzer is the type that charges into things, but not necessarily straight into things. He is somewhat intelligent, but he lacks wisdom and sometimes ends up plotting the best course of action for the wrong thing entirely. He’ll usually start with a sprint before stopping to think about things which can lead to many misunderstandings.

He also usually disregards his personal safety a lot of the time, his reasoning being ‘I can always heal.’ Which can land him in some tricky situations, but he knows that he can escape almost anything if he charges fast enough.

[b]History:[/b] 

When Altzer was young, he was still quite short compared to the other children. This wasn’t helped by the fact that he was always told he was too young to do this, too young to know that, and he developed a youth complex that compelled him to over-compensate for his perceived youth and lacking height. Thusly, he started studying and training as best as he could.

Eventually, his complex faded and over-compensation simply became an aspect of his personality instead of a driving need. He eventually grew to like extremes instead of just trying to be extreme. When his magic awakened, he couldn't be anything but ecstatic.

[b]Likes:[/b] Going fast, big explosions, breaking big things, over-compensating, grand stuff

[b]Dislikes:[/b] Being short, slow things, boring things, not being able to do stuff

[b]Starting Faction:[/b] His parents consider him too young for anything, but he wants to join all of them for some reason or another. Coliseum because of big money and big fights, police and military because he has a little bit of a crush on the princesses.

[b]Magic Shade:[/b] Yellow

[b]Manifestation:[/b] Rocket Lance – Altzer can manifest an extremely large lance which measures about 10 feet in length. The lance is coloured yellow and has a sort of shield over one side of the handle. It is held with the shield facing outwards. The shield isn’t very strong, merely heat-resistant.

At the base of the handle and on the outside of the shield, is a sizeable rocket booster which can be activated at will to boost his speed even further or even provide a limited boost to his jumps. Altzer can lift and thrust with the lance without any problems but its length is sometimes troublesome. The handle stretches past Altzer so the rocket boosters don't burn him.

The boosters have enough power to make him fly to a certain extent, but it is extremely difficult to control and quite dangerous. The handle extends about 1-2 feet behind him and he can only make one lance at a time.

[b]Musical Theme:[/b]
[url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H9vQ41wAsZ0]Disloyal Order of Water Buffalos – Fallout Boy[/url]
[url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uhG-vLZrb-g]Sugar we're going down - Fallout Boy[/url]

[b]Other:[/b] The GM has approved the rocket lance, just as long as it’s not too OP. Also, he probably would have blood all over his face a lot of the time.[/hider]

Woo, got it done faster than I thought I would!
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Alrighty, seems fine to me. (btw, big fan of FOB, especially their earlier stuff)