[quote=@Voltus_Ventus] That all depends on how the plot unfolds, I'm trying for a conservative character trying to get by but is interrupted by politics and unrest, and again the rear depends on how the or unfolds but rest assure I will make her fit. And sorry about the Muscovy thing, I'll fix it. [/quote] Sounds good man, just some errors with the universe-stuff. Happens all the time don't worry 'bout it. I think you and me roleplayed together before. Either that or we talked in the iRC sometimes... [quote=@Blue Demon] [hider=W.I.P. Duke Weade][center][b]Duke Favrin Weade[/b] [i]Duty, Honor, Country[/i][/center] [b]Full name:[/b] Lord Uncle Duke Favrin Halldon Weade [b]Titles:[/b] Duke. Also called Lord Uncle in some cases for he is Uncle to the Lord Regent. [b]Social rank:[/b] Royalty. Uncle to the Regent. [b]Societal position:[/b] Duke Favrin rules over a small town about a ride's distance away from the Keep. [b]Age:[/b] 47 [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Appearance:[/b] [img]http://drakonis.org/uploads/7/v/0/7v0ng7m0e3//2014/03/27/20140327124426-077d715c.jpg[/img] [b]Personality:[/b] Duke Favrin is a stern man to all who know him. He rarely speaks unless he had something to say. He thinks before he speaks or acts. He is very loyal to Whitelands and would do anything for the demesne. After the death of his brother Rickard, Favrin has because even more reticent and some whisper that he'll eventually turn into a recluse. For all his fallibles, Favrin likes to enjoy life. Usually with his wife behind closed doors or riding across the country side on his horse. [b]History:[/b] [b]Skills:[/b] [b]Dreams and fears:[/b] [b]Favored equipment:[/b] [b]Extra:[/b] See The Weade's Coat of Arms.[/hider] [hider=W.I.P. Serving Girl][center][b]Gabbi Ann[/b] [i](PERSONAL MOTTO)[/i][/center] [b]Full name:[/b] Gabbi Ann (As far as she know she has no last name) [b]Titles:[/b] "Hey you" "Girl" [b]Social rank:[/b] Peasant [b]Job:[/b] Servant/ Cleaning Girl [b]Age:[/b] 19 [b]Gender: [/b] [b]Appearance:[/b] [b]Personality:[/b] [b]History:[/b] [b]Skills:[/b] [b]Dreams and fears:[/b] [b]Favored equipment:[/b] [b]Extra:[/b] None[/hider] I'll put this here for now. [/quote] Looks very good so far, except the title 'duke' is reserved for the rulers of the demesne (i.e Rikard was a duke, your character could be a count or baron.) Either that, or the kingdom of Borhilon would be an empire, Rikard would've been king of the north and your character would've been Duke of his geographical area. Not sure if you got what I meant because I'm rambling, but either way it's not a big mistake or anything. I'll leave you to deal with it as you best see fit. That aside that character actually seems really interesting and it has me curious as to how the serving girl fits in now.. I anticipated an uncle that'd try and get the throne for himself, and her as his 'spy' if you will but this changes things. Delicious surprises.. :P I love them.