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Accepted kitten! Though I'm sure you already knew that.
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Accepted kitten! Though I'm sure you already knew that.
After doing that how she died and trying to find a fucking good song for an hour, hell yes I did! And still.... The song could've been better! xP
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<Snipped quote by FantasyDreams> After doing that how she died and trying to find a fucking good song for an hour, hell yes I did! And still.... The song could've been better! xP
Now don't forget about sending me a detailed background as soon as you get the chance. Hopefully Wanderbug will actually get a sheet up and somebody else will take that last spot soon.
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<Snipped quote by kittenlover> Now don't forget about sending me a detailed background as soon as you get the chance. Hopefully Wanderbug will actually get a sheet up and somebody else will take that last spot soon.
Sure thing, but it's 1 AM here, so nighty night! x3
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I'd like to reserve the accidental spot because the crimson man is a crimson butterfly. Is that acceptable?
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Name: Erin Iwasaki Age: 18 Gender: Female Appearance: 5’ 7’’ & 145lb (before muscle atrophy). Dyed orange hair and brown eyes--her skin is a dark olive shade, due to her constant presence outdoors. Personality: Erin is an extremely energetic and outgoing girl, having been surrounded by a loving family and various friends most of her life. She’s not afraid to take risks and is characterized by her zeal for anything athletic. Her life has been dedicated to sports, and it shows in her headstrong desire to always be better and her disregard for almost anything else (including academics). Because of how she grew up, Erin doesn’t have a lot of street smarts or self preservation, but is physically and mentally resilient. At the early stages of the disease, she goes through a dramatic change and becomes much more stoic, almost listless. As time passes, she becomes more introspective and regains the life and energy she had before, finding increased solace in the people she loves and a new interest in books. Physical Traits: The form of a star athlete (in the sense that she's actively participated in various sports). She's currently in her school's softball team as their ace, and often goes to a local gym, swimming on her free time. She’s strong, has good aim and coordination, and houses impressive stamina. Her foray into athletics began when she was 5, when she first tried out gymnastics, then soccer, then martial arts; because of the various sports she cycled in and out of as a child, she has a high aptitude at picking up sports, but is a master of none. Mental Traits: Incredibly strong willed as someone who has dedicated her life to sports. She's adaptable, and is used to learning from failure, having to constantly iterate on strategy and form in order to succeed in whatever she puts her mind to. Has an underutilized and underdeveloped attention span to anything other than what she feels passion for, which attests to her poor academic performance. Color: FF9900 How They Died: Diagnosed with FALS (Genetically inherited ALS) as 3rd high schooler and died within a year. She began the school year with the early symptoms of increasingly slurred speech, but was still able to play sports for a short time. First went to get diagnosed when she could no longer properly swing a bat. Within a few months, the neurodegenerative disease atrophied the muscles in her legs and arms, and she spent the rest of her time hooked up to a ventilatory support system before she died the following year. (Much, much more explained through PM)
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I'd like to reserve the accidental spot because the crimson man is a crimson butterfly. Is that acceptable?
Absolutely. You know what gender your character is going to be yet?
Name: Erin Iwasaki Age: 18 Gender: Female Appearance: 5’ 7’’ & 145lb & picture above Personality: Erin is an extremely energetic and outgoing girl, having been surrounded by a loving family and various friends most of her life. She’s not afraid to take risks and is characterized by her zeal for anything athletic. Her life has been dedicated to sports, and it shows in her headstrong desire to always be better. Because of how she grew up, Erin doesn’t have a lot of street smarts or self preservation, but is physically and mentally resilient. At the early stages of the disease, she goes through a dramatic change and becomes much more stoic, almost listless. As time passes, she becomes more introspective and regains the life and energy she had before, albeit more subdued. Physical Traits: The form of a star athlete. She’s fast, strong, and resilient. Mental Traits: Incredibly strong willed and has an natural aptitude for empathy and communication. Color: Orange How They Died: Contracted ALS as high schooler and died within a year. (Much, much more explained through PM)
Couple little things I'd like you to fix. First things first, I need more detail in the appearance section, way to do the bare minimum. Because the picture you chose doesn't exactly have much to go off of. What color are her eyes? How about her skin? Next, the physical and mental traits are just down right lazy. What kind of athlete is she? Different types will give you different forms of in shape. For example, dancing with give you a lean kind of strength, flexibility, grace, balance, body control. While football would give you muscle strength, speed, the ability to take a hit, etc. At her age she can't be a well rounded athlete, because she hasn't been on the earth long enough. Especially accounting she got ALS and couldn't have continued to be an athlete during that. As for the mental traits, strong willed is fine but that's about it. Why does she have a natural aptitude for empathy? What parts of communication is she good at, public speaking, getting the words from her brain out of her mouth? Now for the color, you blatantly ignored the instructions I put in the character sheet here. What's the code for your color? There are probably a hundred different shades of orange I could use in BBcode and I'm not going to listen to you complain because I chose the wrong one. Your character is not accepted until you fix what I've told you to.
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My character is going to be male, just out of curiosity what level of accidental are you looking for? For example could it be accidental, but still be his fault? Or would you prefer a complete accident?
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My character is going to be male, just out of curiosity what level of accidental are you looking for? For example could it be accidental, but still be his fault? Or would you prefer a complete accident?
It could be either one. Let's say he was doing some stupid stunt or something and made a mistake. Yeah he made a mistake, but it wasn't like he chose to die. So as long as he didn't chose to die it wouldn't count as a suicide.
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Do you still have room ?
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Do you still have room ?
Nope, sorry man. If we lose somebody I'll PM you though. I have the feeling at least one person is going to bail.
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It could be either one. Let's say he was doing some stupid stunt or something and made a mistake. Yeah he made a mistake, but it wasn't like he chose to die. So as long as he didn't chose to die it wouldn't count as a suicide.
Thank you that's all I needed. I'll be wrapping up my CS very soon.
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<Snipped quote by FantasyDreams> Thank you that's all I needed. I'll be wrapping up my CS very soon.
Can't wait to see everyone's character sheet! Well, besides mine, Hebi's and Sander's! :3 I want to see one for the crimson man! x3
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Speaking, I will be getting up a character sheet for Crimson Man. It'll be mostly blank for the time being, but as the RP goes and you learn more about him I'll be adding to it. The clues discovered section will be filled as the teenagers find clues about him in part two.
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Speaking, I will be getting up a character sheet for Crimson Man. It'll be mostly blank for the time being, but as the RP goes and you learn more about him I'll be adding to it. The clues discovered section will be filled as the teenagers find clues about him in part two.
Awesome! I wish I could've done accidental death if I had thought about it! Death by scalding hot water while cooking pasta would be amazing! xD Don't take my idea Sir! *hugs idea tightly and away from Taro*
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Awesome! I wish I could've done accidental death if I had thought about it! Death by scalding hot water while cooking pasta would be amazing! xD Don't take my idea Sir! *hugs idea tightly and away from Taro*
*starts to pull on idea* But I like ittttt!
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<Snipped quote by kittenlover> *starts to pull on idea* But I like ittttt!
Fine! But I get to see the CS first! I want to know that my idea was done right! :3
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@FantasyDreams Woops, sorry about that. WIP finished.
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@FantasyDreams Woops, sorry about that. WIP finished.
Much better, thank you. Accepted! Don't forget to get me that detailed background soon! I only have Hebi's so far.
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Name: Hideki Kita Age: 17 Gender: Male Appearance: Hideki is about 5'7" and weighs 150. His hair, while long, is tamed to stay out of his eyes through years of styling it away. While not visible unless he takes his shirt off, he has a scar the runs diagonally across the left side of his chest. Personality: Hideki is the kind of person who is extremely friendly to everyone he meets. He enjoys making friends and being around people. He is loud and in many people's eyes can be quite obnoxious. He is loyal to a fault though. Once you are his friend, you could punch him as hard as you could and he would still try to find the good in you and everything you do. He considers his friends to be more like his family. Unfortunately, he can also be hotheaded and never backs down from a challenge. Physical Traits: Hideki moves very quickly and was on the track team. He is not known for his clumsiness, however he is clumsier than most of his peers. While fast, he is anything but strong. In fact, people often make fun of him for how weak he is. Mental Traits: Hideki's mind goes a mile a minute. He can hear one thing in a conversation and it will lead him to a whole new topic. Some call it ADD, he considers it to be normal in his own mind. However, he always gets excellent grades and has made the honor roll quite often to the point where many consider him a genius. However he is not good with processing other people's emotions. They actually frighten him sometimes. Color: #228b22 How they died: Never one to back down from a challenge, Hideki and one of his classmates were racing around the school to the rooftop, the other kid was a gymnastics team member and had known Hideki for a while. As they entered the school, Hideki saw an opportunity for an advantage and decided to use the very rarely used, emergency staircase. He ran up the stairs as fast as his legs would carry him. When he finally reached the fourth floor, he turned hard to go up the final set of stairs grabbing the railing. The next thing he knew, he heard a snap, and he was seeing the first floor rushing up to greet him. He final thought was 'I can't believe I'm about to lose'. Clues Discovered:
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