[quote=@Taro]
I'd like to reserve the accidental spot because the crimson man is a crimson butterfly.

Is that acceptable?
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Absolutely. You know what gender your character is going to be yet?

[quote=@WanderBug]
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Name: Erin Iwasaki

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Appearance: 5’ 7’’ & 145lb & picture above

Personality: Erin is an extremely energetic and outgoing girl, having been surrounded by a loving family and various friends most of her life.  She’s not afraid to take risks and is characterized by her zeal for anything athletic.  Her life has been dedicated to sports, and it shows in her headstrong desire to always be better.  Because of how she grew up, Erin doesn’t have a lot of street smarts or self preservation, but is physically and mentally resilient.  

At the early stages of the disease, she goes through a dramatic change and becomes much more stoic, almost listless.  As time passes, she becomes more introspective and regains the life and energy she had before, albeit more subdued. 

Physical Traits: The form of a star athlete.  She’s fast, strong, and resilient. 
 
Mental Traits: Incredibly strong willed and has an natural aptitude for empathy and communication. 

Color: Orange

How They Died: Contracted ALS as high schooler and died within a year. 

(Much, much more explained through PM)
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Couple little things I'd like you to fix.

First things first, I need more detail in the appearance section, way to do the bare minimum. Because the picture you chose doesn't exactly have much to go off of. What color are her eyes? How about her skin?

Next, the physical and mental traits are just down right lazy. What kind of athlete is she? Different types will give you different forms of in shape. For example, dancing with give you a lean kind of strength, flexibility, grace, balance, body control. While football would give you muscle strength, speed, the ability to take a hit, etc. At her age she can't be a well rounded athlete, because she hasn't been on the earth long enough. Especially accounting she got ALS and couldn't have continued to be an athlete during that. As for the mental traits, strong willed is fine but that's about it. Why does she have a natural aptitude for empathy? What parts of communication is she good at, public speaking, getting the words from her brain out of her mouth? 

Now for the color, you blatantly ignored the instructions I put in the character sheet here. What's the code for your color? There are probably a hundred different shades of orange I could use in BBcode and I'm not going to listen to you complain because I chose the wrong one.

Your character is not accepted until you fix what I've told you to.