Ah sorry, I'm not going to go ahead with this. 

Something just doesn't seem right, and I think it needs work otherwise it'll degenerate into one of those RPs that collapses about 6 posts in. I need to take it out of the market and come back to it. At present my schedule is swamped, and the time I need to give to this just isn't there.

Sorry about that. However, as a consolation prize, if any of you fine people wish to take this further in its current state, then you have my full blessing.